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I've listed this article for peer review because I intend to nominate this for GA soon, but am still unsure on the prose and want some advice. Thanks, — VORTEX3427 (Talk!) 03:00, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
Comments from Z1720
editComments after a quick skim:
- "They are produced by Diamond Pistols." needs a citation
- Done
- I don't think the level 3 headings are needed in "Other ventures" because the sections are so small, per WP:OVERSECTION
- Done
- Solo Discography section needs citations
- Done
- TMG discography singles section needs citations.
- Done
- Not sure why the second row in "Filmography" is tagged with better source needed. This should be sorted.
- This is because I couldn't find a good source that mentions the character's name, only that he is part of the cast of the show.
- Ref 1 and Ref 16, Youtube About me section, seem to be the same source. These should be merged.
- @Z1730: The first instance of this is auto-generated by the {{Infobox YouTube}} template for subscriber counts, so I can't figure out how to merge them.
- Why is there only one source used in the sources section? Either move it to the references section or use sfn tags in various sources.
- Done
I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 18:05, 25 October 2022 (UTC)