Wikipedia:Peer review/Common Unix Printing System/archive1

I could do with some help on the following areas:

  1. Review. Is the article clear to non-technical users? Are their spelling mistakes I haven't picked up?
  2. Expansion. The user tools section needs expanding. Any Linux users who use RedHat or KDE could really help here! Also, a section on OS X might be good, but I don't know enough about it (even though I worked for a printer company for a while and supported the thing I never bothered delving into the OS X implementation).
  3. Comment on the diagram. What else should I add to the diagram?
  4. Comment on http://www.catb.org/~esr/writings/cups-horror.html, a critique posted of CUPS and UI design in general in Linux.

Any help would be great! - Ta bu shi da yu 04:04, 5 Jan 2005 (UTC)

I'm too lazy right now to look at the other issues, but I did do a general copyedit run on the article. Fixed quite a number of colons, semicolons and commas. Contents looked good to me. --Plek 20:23, 15 Jan 2005 (UTC)