Wikipedia:Peer review/Crohn's disease/archive2

Crohn's disease

Previous peer review

This is a serious disease that affects many people, so I want to get it to the featured article status that it deserves. I've overhauled and updated every section of the article. Please review my work so we can make this a good resource for others.

Thanks! AdeptLearner123 (talk) 04:53, 22 October 2024 (UTC)

IntentionallyDense

• The lead should be cut down to 4 paragraphs.
• I feel like the differential diagnosis section could be expanded a bit.
• Per WP:MEDDATE "In many topics, a review that was conducted more than five or so years ago will have been superseded by more up-to-date ones, and editors should try to find those newer sources, to determine whether the expert opinion has changed since the older sources were written." I would suggest trying to find alternatives for any sources that were published pre-2014 and limiting the number of sources published pre-2019.

I only took a quick glance at the article but I may have more input later on. IntentionallyDense (talk) 23:29, 27 October 2024 (UTC)

• I noticed a surprising lack of clinical guidelines used in this article. Based on a quick search I found [1] (NICE guidelines are very high quality), [2], [3], [4], [5], and [6]. IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:07, 5 November 2024 (UTC)
• The "Extraintestinal" symptoms could be expanded, past revisions had quite a bit more detail. IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:13, 5 November 2024 (UTC)
• I'd recommend finding some other sources for the diagnosis section as a lot of the text comes from one source and it's usually ideal to have multiple sources confirming the information present. IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:13, 5 November 2024 (UTC)

WikiOriginal-9

There were 257 references before the recent edits. Now there are only 45? Is this actually an improvement? ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 02:40, 4 November 2024 (UTC)