Wikipedia:Peer review/Edward Hewitt Nichols/archive1

I have recently translated this article and would like to receive some feedback on it to improve the article and my content editing skills. Some copy editing has already been done. I am also considering nominating the article for GA. ~ Aselestecharge-paritytime 11:47, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Chidgk1

edit

Some suggestions:

If you can do so without removing important cites shorten the Chinese bibliography a little

Unlink almost all the redlinks

Looks promising for GA - suggest you submit it for GA as soon as you close this peer review as often there is a long wait for review and you can continue to improve it meantime.

If you have time it would be great if you could you write a word or two on Wikipedia:Peer review/Greenhouse gas emissions by Turkey/archive3

Thanks for your comments on above review. If no one else comments here within next few days suggest you close this and request GAR as it is not too far from GA and you can work on it while waiting.: Chidgk1 (talk) 07:32, 15 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I will consider closing some time soon then. ~ Aseleste (t, e | c, l) 02:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]