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Edward Teller

A pretty straightforward biography of a rather contentious character. I think it does a pretty good job of covering his major aspects of his life while being even-handed (pretty difficult given all the bad blood there is around this guy). What else should be in this? Anything that should be expanded upon? Anything that should be shrunk? Your suggestions are desired. --Fastfission 03:20, 11 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Very minor, but use SDI, not SW in the subheading, it looks odd on the contents, like a pop culture reference (Which I know, I know, it was) Sherurcij ^{(talk) (bounties)} 16:32, 11 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Ah, good call. --Fastfission 17:06, 11 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

The lead could use a solid paragraph or two. Peter ^Isotalo 21:21, 11 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Ah, also a good call. I wrote up a summary paragraph, hopefully others can take a look at it. --Fastfission 03:30, 13 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Without any previous knowledge and without commenting on any specific factual content, the structure of the article as a whole looks very good. The amount of information given seems pretty much ideal.

Peter ^Isotalo 00:10, 14 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]