Wikipedia:Peer review/FK Qarabağ/archive1

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I've listed this article for peer review because I think article lacks something to get status of good article

Thanks, NovaSkola (talk) 15:56, 11 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Comment from Sandman.

Lead
  • no parenthesis please.
  • It badly needs a copyedit.
  • "The club is one of the three teams in Azerbaijan, along with Neftchi Baku and Turan Tovuz which has participated in all Azerbaijan Premier League championships so far." -> "The club is one of the three teams in Azerbaijan who have never been relegated from the Azerbaijan top-tier, the other two teams being X and Y".
References
  • All references must have accessdate, publisher, author, date and title. See template:cite web for help.
  • There are no books used, which is quite bad, surely something must exist in the local language.
Main
  • Doesn't split history into so many sub-sections.
  • what is satellite club?