Wikipedia:Peer review/Fardella Crime Family/archive1
Wrote this article recently. I would like some review of it maybe to add anything anyone might know or to find any mistakes I have over looked.
(Gangland 02:32, 19 March 2006 (UTC))
- I would suggest converting the bold subtitles to subsubheadings using ==== subtitle ====. Also, if the external links were used as sources, consider changing it to "References" instead of "External links". AndyZ 02:05, 20 March 2006 (UTC)