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Florida State University

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This article has been GA-level for years and has degraded over time. It was recently delisted despite being nearly completely rewritten, cited, and checked. A peer review can help identify any remaining problems before the article is again submitted for GAN. Thanks! Sirberus (talk) 23:25, 1 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

If another editor would kindly check the references, that would be much appreciated. Sirberus (talk) 13:00, 9 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

After a quick skim, I do not see any major issues with the article. Recommendations below:

Archive the sources using IA Bot.
Remove the gallery under people per WP:NOTGALLERY
Avoid short paragraphs, as seen in "Vietnam War", "Other campuses" and "Reserve Officer Training Corps"

"Organization and administration" suffers from MOS:OVERSECTION and these can be merged.
"Florida State University Libraries" section is too long, suggest cutting prose or using headings to split the section.
The images sometimes cause MOS:SANDWICH and should be fixed.

Hope this helps. I think this is ready for a WP:GAN. Z1720 (talk) 06:04, 4 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much. I will work those items. Sirberus (talk) 12:52, 4 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

All done. Sirberus (talk) 14:41, 4 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]