Wikipedia:Peer review/Fox River Grove level crossing accident/archive1
I have taken this article as far as I can go, based off memory, recent articles, archived articles, and from practical experience with the intersection (driving by it twice). It is missing a couple of pictures (the memorial, and the crossing itself), and a diagram to better explain the picture, but those can be done later. Mostly looking for proper grammar and punctuation. --Rob 18:03, 25 October 2005 (UTC)
- Good job. Nice read, just made a few copyedits. I remember this happening. InvictaHOG 00:25, 26 October 2005 (UTC)
- Looks pretty good. It might be useful to include more information on the make-up of the passenger train, the frequency of trains, etc. I think that what would be really helpful is a description of the sequence of events leading up to the crash. Also, it might be helpful to include more information on the make-up of the commuter train, the frequency of commuter trains, etc. JYolkowski // talk 02:27, 31 October 2005 (UTC)