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I've listed this article for peer review because it's been years since I took anything through the FLC process, and I would like to get this article to FL status as the cornerstone of a Game of Thrones (season 1) good topic. I will muddle through this myself, but a few pointers from an experienced reviewer can probably shortcut the overall effort needed to bring it up to FL standards.
Thanks, Jclemens (talk) 07:04, 20 February 2012 (UTC)
- Quick comments
I have no experience writing Featured Lists, but here are some suggestions to help you along:
- The lead needs strengthening per WP:LEAD. Perhaps consider expanding to include other areas covered in the article -- production, casting, filming, awards, etc.
- The "Music" section also seems somewhat skimpy. Anything to say about composition, orchestration, the theme song, etc.?
- Something more about the awesome title sequence would be interesting; I see that it was given an award, and that the "making-of" was on the DVD. Anything more to say about its production, reception?
- I also don't see any critical response/reviews section. Is that not standard?
I hope these comments help! María (yllosubmarine) 13:38, 21 February 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks! I'll get to working on these... Jclemens (talk) 06:24, 23 February 2012 (UTC)