Wikipedia:Peer review/Gary Donnelly (Irish republican)/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because that's what you do
Thanks, TheWarOfArt (talk) 19:54, 19 August 2014 (UTC)
Doing... I'll take the privilege of reviewing this article.
Here's what I found so far:
- Lead could use some expansion.
- An infobox containing info and a picture of the person in question could help (if not, then picture will do).
- Is there a birthdate for the person?
- Any mention of his previous life before his time in prison and with politics?
- Add the date you put the references in the article.
- Who wrote the articles you have links for?
What I've found so far is good and is somewhere close to start-class quality if the changes are made. Keep up the work. DepressedPer (talk) 07:32, 28 August 2014 (UTC)