Wikipedia:Peer review/GayFest/archive1

GayFest

I would like to nominate this article for featured status soon, but I am worried it may be a bit too short. I'd just like some advice as to how it should be structured, and any extra information to add so that it can be a bit longer. Thanks, Ronline ✉ 07:52, 28 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I found the article to be well written and very interesting. A few comments. Hope they help:

I would write out the names of the organisations ACCEPT and LGBT out in full the first time you mention them.
It would be interesting to know a bit more about the festival events themselves - what events were on the program? Were there any prominent people involved? How many people participate?

Jen Powell-Psmith 10:25, 11 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your feedback! ACCEPT is not an acronym, but simply a word ("accept" means the same thing in both English and Romanian, and is spelt the same way). The reason it is capitalised is because the organisation chose for it to be capitalised. As to your second point: the participation in each parade has been given and sourced. I'll try to expand a bit on the events and on the general "character" of each year's festival. Cheers,

Ronline ✉ 11:01, 11 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]