Wikipedia:Peer review/Google/archive3

previous PR

Yes, I know this has been peer reviewed before. However, the article's changed a lot since it was last reviewed, and I feel that it would benefit from another peer review.


Thanks,

şœśэїŝәқιᅥṱᾅἻқᅡ 05:00, 5 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

First Impressions:

Section Issues:

  • The "Environmental record" title sounds a little POV and the section is too short. Maybe that section and Google.org" can be worked into a more general section to balance out the "Criticism" part.
  • The "Criticism" part is a pretty good length. I would say tad bit more on the censorship part, though.
  • The "Google.mobi" section I would move under the "Growth" section.
  • More main headers (too much under "History" - "Growth" may work)

Contrent:

  • Needs more about the search engine. I know it has it's own page, but that's mainly what the company's know for.
  • Needs more on AdSense/AdWords and the advertising side in general.
  • Something should be said about Google's partnership with Mozilla.
  • Google video - YouTube connection?
  • A few more images in the middle would be nice.
  • No reason is given for "Another trademark concern is about Google's Gmail in the UK and several other countries."

Style:

  • Inconsistent formats "USD100,000" and "$1.67 billion"
  • IPO is used a few times before it's linked, some might not know what that is
  • "Acquisitions" needs to flow better - not so choppy.

- Rocket000 12:43, 7 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]