Wikipedia:Peer review/High School Musical/archive1

High School Musical

Article is starting too look pretty good and has been cleaned up a lot. I'd like to know what else we can do to help the article. --Malevious Userpage •Talk Page• Contributions 23:01, 14 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 23:08, 15 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Trebor

As a general pointer, you may like to look at the Wikiproject Film Style guidelines. My thoughts:

The Plot Summary (could just be named Plot, or Synopsis) needs work on the prose and could probably be cut down a little. Try to avoid stubby paragraphs with only one or two sentences.
The Cast section could be done as in the Style guidelines, e.g. "Zac Efron as Troy Bolton:" Then, the information in characters could be put with the appropriate cast member.
There is a mix of citation styles, some inline and some embedded external links. I'd stick with inline citations throughout.
There should be more information on the Development and Production of the film - at the moment, a lot of the article is in-universe
There are also a lot of lists and tables, which break up the article too much. For sections like Awards, try converting them into prose.
It could do with more references throughout. Trebor 23:36, 15 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I notice there's currently no section on critical reception. Consider adding one, with quotations and references to reviews of the movie and/or soundtrack. —ShadowHalo 08:38, 16 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]