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I've listed this article for peer review because I intend to take it to FAC somewhat soon, and I'd like a fresh set of eyes before I take it all the way up.
Thanks, ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 16:56, 16 March 2011 (UTC)
- The storm developed in a large region of convection across the Gulf of Mexico and western Atlantic - This would usually imply that a surface low developed out of a persistent convective complex, which is contradictory to the MH, which states Ginger originated in an upper-level low which moved to the surface.
- On September 14 Ginger slowed - I usually like to see commas being used sparingly, but it looks weird without one here.
- The semicolon in that line seems to serve little purpose other than to forcefully adjoin two sentences.
- I would link soybean.
- Further north, moderate rainfall and winds spread through the Mid-Atlantic states - "Rainfall" usually means the precipitation that has already been produced (ie. rainfall at Raleigh reached 4 in), while "rain" is the meteorological phenomena.
- the feature was caused by an anticyclone - The ULL or the mimic-ITCZ was caused by the high?
Just a few preliminary comments from the first few paragraphs. Juliancolton (talk) 17:56, 16 March 2011 (UTC)