Wikipedia:Peer review/Indonesian National Revolution/archive1

I did a complete re-write and expansion of this article some months back. I'd like a general review on anything and everything in the article. i know it lacks pictures and I am working on getting a few more maps together. Merbabu 12:39, 5 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan 09:08, 20 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]