General whatever. Suggestions on clumsy prose, poor aesthetics, NPOV, let rip on it. Seegoon 23:09, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
- Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 23:28, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
- While the article is interesting, the introduction fails to assert how the band is notable and worthy for inclusion as a Wikipedia article. Articles about bands are deleted every day for that very reason. If the band is notable, then perhaps the introduction could be expanded a bit. See WP:NOT. -Amatulic 22:49, 31 October 2006 (UTC)