Wikipedia:Peer review/Jessica Simpson discography/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I feel that this article has been improved nicely. I need extra suggestions to make this article good for a FL nomination.
Thanks, Novice7 (Talk) 14:16, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
- Lead
- Simpson's debut album Sweet Kisses was released... There should be a comma after "album" and before "was".
- released by Columbia Records on... "Through" not "by"
- on November, 1999., poor English, "in November 1999" no comma and no "on"
- There should be a hyphen between twenty and five
- The album sold about 1.9 million copies[3] in the US produced three singles. The reference [3] needs to be after the period.
- ...RIAA.[4][5]The third single from the album... Space at beginning of sentence.
- Add link to single (single (music)) the first time the word is mentioned.
- "I Think I'm in Love with You" reached number twenty one in the US comma after the song name.
- released in June, 2001 delete comma.
- dated June 5, 2001 deleted this
- first week dated June 5, 2001[6][7] and was certified Gold by RIAA.[2] [6][7] should be at the end of the sentence
- Irresistible sold 755,000 copies in the US[3] and spawned two singles. [3] Should be at end of sentence.
- The title track reached number fifteen in the US and also reached top twenty in many international markets. Two things: insert "album's" before "title track" and place reference [4] at the end of the sentence.
- In July, 2002 Simpson released her first remix album titled This Is the Remix. Remove the comma between July and 2002 and place a comma after 2002.
- Simpson's third studio album was released in August, 2003. Add comma after album abd remove comma between August and 2003.
- {{xt|The album reached number two in the US[1] and was certified three times platinum by RIAA.[2] Move reference [1] to end of sentence.
- Simpson's seventh single "With You" reached Add comma before and after "With You".
- fourteen in the US[4], and comma goes before reference [4]
- album's re-release[9], a cover comma goes before reference [9].
- In November, 2004 Simpson released her remove comma between November and 2004.
- Add link to Christmas album.
- After switching record label to Epic Records[10], in August 2006 Simpson released her fifth studio album A Public Affair. reword.
- The album has sold just over 300,000 copies in the US[3] and spawned three singles Reference [3] at end of sentence.
- a cover of Nancy Sinatra's "These Boots Are Made For Walkin' originally Comma after song name AND the Apostrophe should be a quotation mark.
- film The Dukes of Hazzard in which Simpson co-starred[11], reached number fourteen reference [11] should go after the comma.
- The title track, released add "album" before "title track".
- album, also reached number fourteen[4] in the US and topped the US Billboard Hot Dance Club Play.[4]. Delete reference [4] after fourteen and remove spare period after reference [4].
- a country imprint of Columbia Records[13], and released Do You Know Two things: reference [13] should go after comma and comma should go after "Do You Know"
- lead single "Come On Over", reached Remove comma
- five in the US Billboard Hot 100[4] and number eighteen in the US Billboard Hot Country Songs[4]. remove reference [4] after "US Billboard Hot 100" and the period should go before reference [4].
- October, 2010 Sony Music released a compilation remove comma after October.
- album v Playlist: The Very Best of Jessica Simpson "titled" should be "entitled".
- christmas album titled Happy Christmas is entitled, not titled.
- scheduled for a November 2010 release[16] period before reference [16]
- Albums
- The whole graphic design goes against WP:DISCOGRAPHY, see Slipknot discography for a great example.
- Their are only 13 columns in Do You Know, when there should be 14.
- Do You Know peaked at #1 on the U.S. Billboard Top Country Albums chart. reference needed.
- Softpak albums should not have a "Notes" section.
- Singles
- The whole graphic design goes against WP:DISCOGRAPHY, see Slipknot discography for a great example.
- "Singles" and "Promotional singles" should be merged together.
- "A Little Bit" was only released outside the United States. reference needed.
- Come On Over" also peaked at #18 on the US Billboard Hot Country Songs. reference needed.
- "Remember That" also peaked at #41 on the US Billboard Hot Country Songs. reference needed.
- Released only to promote the album. TV Shows performances. reference needed.
- Released only in Brazil, through the soundtrack of "As Filhas Da Mae." reference needed.
- Promotional single only in the US. reference needed.
- Released only in Christmas days, in U.S., Canada, UK ,Australia and Asia. reference needed.
- Released only to US and Canada Country Radio stations. reference needed.
- Opening Theme to "The Price of Beauty". Promotion of the series only. reference needed.
Removed the links to promotional singles as there are no sources Novice7 (Talk) 11:25, 7 November 2010 (UTC)
- Miscellaneous appearances
- Rename to "Other appearances"
- Videography
- List of music videos, showing year released and director(s) remove this
- Add ""—" denotes items which were not released in that country or failed to chart." to the bottom of the DVDs graph.
- Other
- I don't see any problems with the references, but Amazon might be challenged as a reliable source.
- I didn't check the verifiability of the references, so I hope it's accurate...
- File:Jsimpsondsc00203.jpg needs more information on it. I strongly suggest using Template:Information.
Eveything's fixed. Discography updated per DISCOGSTYLE
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