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Joe Warbrick

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Joe Warbrick was a 19th century rugby footballer who organised and captained the 1888-89 New Zealand Native Football team. I'm hoping to take this article to WP:FAC sometime next year. It's been a Good Article for a couple of years now, and I think it's close to being ready for FAC, but want any feedback I can get before nominating.

Thanks, Shudde ^talk 14:33, 24 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Following the tour he also criticised the impartiality of the English referees - umm, isn't impartiality a good thing? Don't you mean bias/partiality..? Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:46, 30 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The Natives played a total of 107 rugby matches, including 74 in the British Isles, and the tour remains the longest tour in rugby history - see if you can reword so only one "tour" in sentence...

I'd add some more details about his death, if they can be sourced.

Otherwise looks in order...a nice little read. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:50, 30 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your comments! I'll try and address those points. I appreciate the time you took to read and comment. Thanks. -- Shudde ^talk 15:55, 30 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]