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John Day (printer)

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I'd like this eventually to be put up as a Featured Article candidate, so I'd appreciate any comments or corrections. PRiis 15:41, 20 Jan 2005 (UTC)

  • The dates should be linked appropriately. A slightly longer lead section wouldn't hurt. &mdash; is preferred to "--". There may be a few POV problems, i.e. "a beautiful new italic font". Johnleemk | Talk 13:41, 25 Jan 2005 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the suggestions. I've taken your advice and made some changes. PRiis 20:17, 25 Jan 2005 (UTC)
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