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Kotli District

I just want to know what I can add to this article and how can I can improve the quality. All comments will be appreciated. Thanks in Advance. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Nyangel252 (talk • contribs)

Comments by SpecialWindler

Here are some comments and y:

There is no lead. You must have a LEAD
- See WP:LEAD for more information
- The first sentence of the history section, should probably be the first sentence of your lead.
You need references/sources
- For all I know, the whole lot could be nonsense.
- See WP:REFERENCE and WP:CITE for more information
You have a gallery of images, there is no need.
- Spread your images around the article, like other articles.
In the see also section you have a red link, remove it. You can't see also it, can you.

That should be enough to get you going, especially the references. SpecialWindler talk 23:47, 17 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The article is difficult to follow for someone who does not already know about the region. Material about geography should be removed from the history section. The article on Alsace_Lorraine might be good inspiration for how to reorganize your article. VisitorTalk 23:40, 20 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]