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List of How I Met Your Mother episodes

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I've listed this article for peer review because I am interested in getting this list promoted to Featured List status. I've never gotten anything through WP:FLC before; and I've only tried once, so any help would be appreciated. I realize that a few of the episodes in the list are lacking sources for its viewership; and I am currently hunting down all the sources. All other suggestions would be extremely helpful!

Thanks, haha169 (talk) 05:24, 13 August 2013 (UTC)

The "How I met your mather" of the begining should be both bolded and italic. "...of five friends, Ted Mosby (Josh Radnor) and his friends..." is a bit repetitive, try to reformulate it. The "As of May 13..." sentence is a single-sentence paragraph, try to expand it or move it somewhere else. Is "Pilot" the episde nome, or was it a pilot episode without name? Isn't the "2010s portal" too generic? Cambalachero (talk) 17:43, 26 August 2013 (UTC)

"How I Met Your Mother" should not be bolded, see MOS:BOLDTITLE. What do you mean by repetitive; do you disagree with the parenthesis and the actors? That is a single-sentence paragraph, and I agree it should be incorporated somewhere else. I will definitely keep that in mind. By the time I hope to send this to FLC though, the series should be concluded, rendering that sentence obsolete. "Pilot" is generally the episode name for many sitcom pilots. I honestly don't know why it is in the 2010s portal, but I also don't see anything wrong with that... --haha169 (talk) 19:39, 26 August 2013 (UTC)