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If you look at the history of this page, you'll see that I've changed it significantly. I have referenced all names, all pictures are from Wikipedia themselves and I've put them all into a table. I want to get this list to very good standard. Kindly let me know the necessary changes/mods that maybe needed to get this list to the highest rating possible.
Thanks, D437 (talk) 07:32, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
- Comments from Stfg
- I've copy edited the lede for better grammar and flow.
- The sentence "Indian violinists have performed concerts all over the world and have achieved a lot of fame and success over the years" is puffery and isn't verified by the source given. Suggest removing it as it doesn't give any real information.
- The references need filling out to provide more details. Just a URL and a title are insufficient. I suggest using the {{cite}} templates.
- I haven't checked all of the references, but the following are unacceptable:
- FN6 (B. Sasikumar Profile): appears to be his own web page, and McAfee SiteAdviser warns of "risky behaviors"
- FN9 ("Dwaram Venkataswamy Naidu") Wikipedia page, not allowed as a reference per WP:CIRCULAR
- The following, being the subjects' own web sites (if they are really notable, you should be able to find suitable references in the articles about them):
- FN7 (Balabhaskar Profile - Official Website)
- FN10 (Embar Kannan - About)
- FN24 (Lalgudi Vijayalakshmi - Profile)
- FN31 (N. Sivanandan - Profile)
- FN33 (Official Website of Sangeeta Shankar)
- FN38 (V.V. Ravi - Profile)
- FN39 (Vittal Ramamurthy's Official Page)
- Hope this helps. --Stfg (talk) 16:24, 18 December 2014 (UTC)