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List of Minnesota Vikings head coaches

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I've listed this article for peer review because I said so. Gary King (talk) 03:16, 8 December 2008 (UTC)

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs) There you go, put some style into it!

• "The Minnesota Vikings are a professional American football team based in Minneapolis, Minneapolis." Spot the typo (look at the last word).
• "The Vikings played their first game in the 1961 NFL season after the team's owners withdrew their membership from the American Football League and instead joined the NFL as an expansion team."
• "A running total of the number of coaches of the Browns." Surely you meant the Vikings?
• It should be Sports Reference LLC (my italics for emphasis) in the references.
• Make reference dates consistent.
• What is the difference between "Pro Football Hall of Fame" (ref 1) and "Pro Football Hall of Fame Official website"? Personally, I like the first one better, but in italics. Dabomb87 (talk) 03:24, 8 December 2008 (UTC)

All done Gary King (talk) 03:27, 8 December 2008 (UTC)

• "Grant's full coaching record with the Vikings is 259 regular season games coached with a record of 158–96–5 and a W–L percentage of .622." W–L-->winning.
• "He is also 10–12 in 22 Playoff games." "Playoff" should not be capitalized.
• Coaches who both spent entire NFL head coaching career with the team and were Hall-of-Famers should have a different color background (see List of New Jersey Nets head coaches). Dabomb87 (talk) 03:28, 8 December 2008 (UTC)

All done Gary King (talk) 03:34, 8 December 2008 (UTC)