Wikipedia:Peer review/List of Rugby League World Cup hat-tricks/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I was wondering what the article needs to gain featured list status. Any feedback is welcome.
Thanks, WDM10 (talk) 05:58, 14 February 2020 (UTC)
Hello WDM10 I read through your artical and here are some things I would like to point out. Note I'm not very fermilia with the WP:FLC.
- The 'All statistics are correct as of 9 February 2020' is unsesery dew to the gerneral disclamer.
- The key feels odd to me. I would say added number of overall tries to another column.
- There are a few grematical errors in the lead.
- Paragraph two and three of the lead could be rewritten as it very spesific statistica. I would suggest added most har-trick scorers etc.
- The "Player hat-tricks by their national team" should be reworded and column headers made clearer.
— RealFakeKimT 19:20, 22 March 2020 (UTC)
- Hello @RealFakeKim:, I've fixed up some of the issues you mentioned. Can you please point out to me the grammatical errors in the lead? Also, could you please give me ideas as to how to rewrite the second and third paragraphs? Thanks a lot for reviewing my article. WDM10 (talk) 05:54, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
- WDM10, sorry I missread the lead thats all fine. For the other paragraphs I would say something like:
- Out of the 62 hat-tricks scored six people have achived it twice. These being Ian Schubert, Billy Slater, Akuila Uate, Manu Vatuvei, Jarryd Hayne, Suliasi Vunivalu and Valentine Holmes. 10 people have scored an aditinal trie on top of the hat-trick. Valentine Holmes is the only player to score 5 and 6 tries respectfuly in a single game. Four players have scored hat-tricks while being on the losing side. These being Bob Fulton, Ian Schubert, Damien Blanch and Chris Taripo. Billy Smith is the only player to score a hat-trick of feald goals.
- @RealFakeKim: Thanks a lot for your help.