Wikipedia:Peer review/List of Star Trek: The Original Series episodes/archive3
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It's been a month since the last time this article was peer reviewed, and I've put a whole lot of effort into overhauling the whole thing. The only remaining task I have left is to rewrite the episode summaries for "Season 2" and "Season 3," and then I intend to nominate it as a Featured List. (Here's what the page looked like before I started.) I'd appreciate any comments or suggestions on what I've done so far. -- Aatrek / TALK 16:51, 1 June 2009 (UTC)
- Comments by David Fuchs
- It's looking good, and as loath as I am to let someone break my 100% domination on Star Trek Featured content, I guess I'll have to let it slide :P Some comments:
- Perhaps for verification purposes, you could ref the plot summaries to the star trek.com recaps.
Good thinking. The summaries need more expansion for sure, but what's there is sourced, at least. -- Aatrek / TALK 20:32, 4 June 2009 (UTC)
- Some statements are unsourced and should probably be, such as Whitney's appearances in later films and Voyager, and The Animated Series' air date.
- "NBC eventually surrendered to the fans' demand" -> a touch POV language there?
- Adjusted.-- Aatrek / TALK 20:10, 4 June 2009 (UTC)
- The mustard (or should I say command gold) dividers between eps in season 1 are missing their left and right borders (season 2 and 3 seem to have them).
- It's actually an optical illusion; the colored dividers actually display OVER the borders, and the gold is light enough to seem to disappear. I've darkened the gold color to hopefully alleviate some of that. -- Aatrek / TALK 20:10, 4 June 2009 (UTC)
- Looking through other List of/Season TV articles, it seems like the episode synopsis go into slightly more detail (as in revealing the conclusion of the episode). Since you're providing more than a single line synopsis anyhow, maybe you should just give a concise paragraph outline for the full thing. Ep lists aren't really consistent about this sort of thing.