Wikipedia:Peer review/List of characters in South Park/archive1

List of characters in South Park

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I've listed this article because I was wondering what it needs to be ready for FAC. I was wondering especially about leaving the list as a table, or if it is really necessary to switch it into paragraphs as some people suggested at the previous FAC.

Thanks, Nergaal (talk) 05:58, 14 August 2010 (UTC)

• Comments by Sandman888
• First it's FLC, not FAC.
• I think tables works fine, but perhaps paragraphs wd give it a more prose-like feel.
• the role column doesn't seem to be referenced, neither is the first appearance. Suggest re-write using references and give me a nudge and I'll look over the prose.

Creation and inception

• "with an original idea" remove original
• "Merchandise" and the subsequent section doesn't belong in this list, but in the South Park main article.
  • • These two were requested during the previous FLC, with the reason that other character-list FLs have these two. Nergaal (talk) 23:37, 21 August 2010 (UTC)
      • Far too often the FLC process is based on an appeal to authority blindness rather than looking at the article and wonder whether it is truly necessary. Sandman888 (talk) ^{Latest PR} 14:51, 25 August 2010 (UTC)
  • That's a preliminary review, but I suspect the prose to change when references are used. Sandman888 (talk) ^{Latest PR} 13:14, 21 August 2010 (UTC)