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List of current sovereign monarchs

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I have just recently redeveloped this list. I'd like some feedback regarding where and how other editors feel I can make further improvements.

Thanks, Nightw 04:35, 1 September 2010 (UTC) Comments Sandman888 (talk) 14:02, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Tables

I'm not that crazy about the layout, it is hard to read on other devices. Consider using plain wikitables.
- Thanks for your comments, Sandman888! The layout change was made back in 2008. Is it the colour scheme that makes it hard to read, or the actual table format used? Nightw 07:43, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Notes + Refs

Per WP:ACCESS don't use collapsible/scrollable, as it wont show on mobiles.

Removed. Nightw 07:43, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

We don't start lists that way anymore, have a look at WP:FLC and check some of the list with many supports for an idea of how to start a lead section.

Done, although I'll need to reference it. Nightw 15:12, 8 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Comment

Get rid of the background color as it serves no purpose
Need a longer lead section
Notes need references

—Chris!_c/t 23:33, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your comments, Chris. I've expanded the lead section. With regards to the notes, all of that information was obtained through the sources cited in the refs column on the main table. Is it necessary to put inline citations within the notes also? Nightw 15:47, 8 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]