Wikipedia:Peer review/Marlon Coleman/archive1

Marlon Coleman

This peer review discussion is closed.

I've listed this article for peer review because...
I would like to get this article to GA status, I have asked around WikiProject Oklahoma for assistance, I thought that it may help ask for a peer review as well.
I am new to Wikipedia and this is the first article I have created, so I would like to take this as a learning opportunity to see what I could do to make this article better.
Main Objectives of this Peer Review

Ensuring compliance with all Wikipedia guidelines and policies
Article meets Wikipedia writing style guidelines
Determining the article's path to Good Article Status

Thanks, Trey Wainman (talk) 22:40, 10 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

Comments after a quick skim:

"Non-primary source needed" tags should be resolved. Additional sources can be found in WP:LIBRARY, Google, or your local library system.
The lede is quite short. I suggest expanding it to cover all major topics in the article.

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 01:14, 26 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]