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Michael Schumacher

Done a lot of work on this in the last few mounths. There is talk of make this a FAC. I think it's best to give it a PR first. Buc 08:08, 28 March 2007 (UTC)

• Numerous one line/two line paragraphs will need to be worked on and eradicated. -- Zleitzen^(talk) 05:26, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
• I would suggest the following for starters. Hope this helps. Bigmike 18:54, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
  • Re-align the text to standard (left), rather than 'justified'. I think most FA have their text aligned to the left which looks so much better than justified text.
  • Could the "Early years" section be expanded to more than two paragraphs?
  • The article is quite long, could it be split up, perhaps a separate article could be created for his career with the Ferrari team?