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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to nominate it for WP:FL at some point and would like to know what else needs to be done to improve it to that standard.
Thanks, BelovedFreak 15:33, 10 July 2010 (UTC)
Hi, here a few things you might consider:
- In the intro "dicography" and "Missy Higgins" need not be in bold text. I don't think any of the FL discographies use it (check out the David Bowie discography)
- For the details of the albums and EPs you list "Formats" (plural); I would change it to "Format" (singular) since only one format is listed.
- Section: "Live albums" Shouldn't this be "Live album" since only one is listed?
- Live & Acoustic [iTunes Exclusive] Are the words within the brackets ([]) actually part of the title? If not they should be in presented in plain text with no bold and no italics.
- All for Believing The release date indicates that its a US release. What about the rest of the records? Where were they released? Australia? Perhaps you could attach a note somewhere stating something like "Except where noted all records were released in Australia"
- DVDs Why aren't they presented in a chart? I would do so to make that section uniform with the rest.
Hope this helps. — Jimknut (talk) 23:15, 11 July 2010 (UTC)
- I missed this somehow on my watchlist, but thanks for your comments, I will work on your suggestions. As far as I know, the Live album title is as given, but I only have one source for it.--BelovedFreak 16:35, 13 July 2010 (UTC)