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Nelson Mandela

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I've listed this article for peer review because it is already a GA and I want to know if could possibly be a candidate for GA status? If not, what is it missing?

Thanks, Miss Bono^[zootalk] 13:25, 22 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Do you mean a candidate for FA status? -- Khazar2 (talk) 13:34, 27 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Oh, yes Khazar2, sorry I meant a candidate for FA. Miss Bono^[zootalk] 15:18, 2 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

The prose looks good, generally.
"he established a new constitution": he promulgated a new constitution
"kraal": Our article on the word says it's a corral, but you've linked it to something else, and "corral" wouldn't make sense here.
"their transition from boys to men; the rite over, he was given the name": Would anything important be lost here by "... and was given the name"?
"his BA ... his BA exams": his bachelor's degree ... his final exams [if they were final exams]
I got down to Defiance Campaign and Transvaal ANC Presidency: 1950–1954. - Dank (push to talk) 02:36, 10 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]