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Back at peer review after this article has passed a GAN — I plan to take it to FAC later this year. However, as an inexperienced nominator at FAC, I'd sincerely appreciate some more detailed feedback regarding Manual of Style compliance and the featured article criteria. I look forward to hearing your comments! —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 05:02, 17 February 2024 (UTC)
Comments by Skyshifter
editNice.
- I recommend replacing Your EDM, Dancing Astronaut and EDM.com with higher quality sources, according to WP:RSN#Electronic music sources.
In progress—TS
Done for now. Thanks for your help with these, I've replaced citations to these sources wherever possible, and the only remaining ones are for verifying uncontroversial factual statements. —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 21:45, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
- Could add prose to the year-end lists section, similarly to A Crow Looked at Me#Accolades. I'm also unsure if the song positions are worthy of inclusion; maybe only the album ones should be kept.
In progress. I've removed the entries for the songs, and they're already listed on their respective articles anyways. I'll probably summarize the remainder with some prose as well. —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 05:21, 19 February 2024 (UTC)
Partly done. Entries for the singles removed, as above, but I don't see much point in converting the table to prose. There's already a section above if readers want the reviewers' comments on the album, so there's no additional information to be gained with that change. —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 06:09, 26 March 2024 (UTC)
Skyshiftertalk 20:16, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
TechnoSquirrel69 and Skyshifter, this PR has not recieved any comments in the last two months. Should we close it? 🌙Eclipse (talk) (contribs) 11:58, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the reminder; I'm closing it now. —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 22:04, 16 May 2024 (UTC)