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Obi-Wan Kenobi

Hello I'm seeing if there is anything wrong with this article before I take it to Featured article candidates.I do think it probably needs more inline references.--Team6and7 21:59, 2 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 00:31, 3 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The article needs to be rewritten with an out-of-universe perspective MoS. Also I definetely agree with you about the lack of inline references. There are also a lot of trivia looking sections. You can check out this wonderful examples of Star wars character articles; Padmé Amidala, Jabba the Hutt and Palpatine. - Tutmosis 20:45, 3 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Yes I will look in to doing that ,but I got rid of a trivia section before. I think you must mean the Outside of Star Wars section I moved most of the old trivia section into it if it fit into that section. It was there before I got rid of trivia section. I don't want to get rid of it do you think I should?--Team6and7 23:51, 3 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Well you probably be better off converting it into prose under "In popular culture". My comment also refered to "Expanded Universe" section which too needs to be converted into prose instead of bullets. - Tutmosis 00:58, 4 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks I guess the bullets were causing trouble I will format that better. Any thing else any do you think that the article needs. Team6and7 21:39, 6 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]