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I have done a major overhaul of this page over the last few months and I went ahead and put it up for GA review. I didn't really think about the PR process until just now (doh...), but since the GA review backlog is probably still a few weeks long, I wanted to go ahead and see if anyone would be able to take another look at it. Copy editing and editing for flow, making sure they layout is up to spec, that statements are under the correct headings, and help with finding any information on this county regarding its history from 1930 to 1990. I've looked at this too much to be able to reliably find problems anymore!
Thanks, nf utvol (talk) 12:57, 19 August 2022 (UTC)
- Since the article is currently at GAN, it cannot also have an open PR. Therefore, I'm going to close this PR. Some comments for the nominator, Nfutvol to consider after a quick skim:
- The lede needs expansion to summarise major sections of the article.
- "Protected areas" needs citations
- First paragraph in Elections needs citations.
- "Cities and towns" needs citations
- "Notable individuals" needs citations
- Take a look at Hamilton, Ontario to discover what is needed and not needed in a city/place article. This one has lots of short, stubby paragraphs that I think can be merged.
That's all. Good luck in the GAN. Z1720 (talk) 19:32, 2 October 2022 (UTC)