Wikipedia:Peer review/Philadelphia Phillies team records/archive1

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I've listed this article for peer review because I'm going to make a push for WP:FL with it. I've decided to do this first rather than going straight to the FLCs because this list is quite a different format from the usual lists that I make. All input is welcome. Thank you! KV5Squawk boxFight on! 21:12, 18 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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Overall looks pretty good well done NapHit (talk) 15:48, 26 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]


Ruhrfisch comments: Agree this looks pretty good.

  • I wondered if there were some team photos that could be used for the team records sections? Any team photo before 1923 would be PD-Old presumably.
    • I've found 1904 and 1915 team pictures on the Library of Congress website. Nothing remarkable about the 1904 team, but the 1915 team was the first year that the Phillies made the playoffs. I am going to retouch the photo and upload it soon. KV5Squawk boxFight on! 22:44, 27 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • I also wondered if it would make sense to have any introductory text at the start of the four major sections (Individual career records, Individual single-season records, Team single-game records, and Team season records. For example the team season records might also mention playoffs or World Series appearances, or the Team single game records might mention who the opponenets were for some of the records. Just an idea.
    • I could definitely do some mini-leads since this is divided up into sections; I don't know what I would write to add substance to the list. I'm having a hard time deciding what to put in there. Suggestions? KV5Squawk boxFight on! 22:44, 27 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • There been a strong movement to remove date linking in articles - it is not required, but it is something to be aware of. Not sure if it will arise at FLC.
    • Actually, in baseball articles, stand-alone years are supposed to be linked to the appropriate Major League baseball season or year in baseball article. I haven't seen anything like that pop up at FLC, but thanks for the heads-up! KV5Squawk boxFight on! 22:44, 27 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Hope this helps, thanks for your recent peer review work Ruhrfisch ><>°° 16:19, 26 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]