Wikipedia:Peer review/Pilot (30 Rock)/archive1

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to begin getting it ready for FA but I know it is FAR from it now. Does anyone have any suggestions of what needs to be added, what needs to be taken away and what needs to be expanded?


Thanks, Jamie jca (talk) 23:50, 1 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]