Wikipedia:Peer review/Pretty Girl Rock/archive1

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get it to GA status. Comments about improvements for the article are more than welcome.

Thanks, Ozurbanmusic (talk) 05:36, 27 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, Ozurbanmusic, I'll review this article. I enjoyed my first reader through, but I'll review according the GA criteria. --Philcha (talk) 11:20, 3 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll use Wikipedia:WikiProject Songs as a checklist where appropriate. --Philcha (talk) 11:31, 3 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I think the comments I've made so far may imply changes to the structure, so please respond these. --Philcha (talk) 12:53, 3 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Coverage

  • Nothing about conception (where the idea came from and by whom) before (first) production. --Philcha (talk) 12:46, 3 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Section "Composition and critical reception" has nothing about composition. If there is "Composition" info, I'd expect it early in "Background and release". --Philcha (talk) 12:46, 3 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Any variations in composition, arrangement, etc. between performances, e.g. many singers use easier versions for live than for recorded, or the album may have improvements over the single? I note Hilson gave a remixed version of "Pretty Girl Rock" on the Lopez Tonight and a Motown-themed performance for the Late Night with David Letterman, and more in section "Track listing". --Philcha (talk) 12:46, 3 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Structure

Infobox

(sections of the article)

Personnel

Images

Check for dead links and DAB links

Lead (I review the lead last in case any of the main text has changed)