Wikipedia:Peer review/Principal, Ecuador/archive1

I've listed this article for peer review because… it needs verification and minor editing Thanks, Jameson Jameson Foulke (talk) 16:59, 16 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Well, this is not a place to ask for improving an article, but for comments on how it can be improved. Quickly: it does not follow WP:EL (has external links rather then interlinks in body), does not have a proper WP:LEAD, has only one section that merges two concepts (Culture and Tourism), so is poorly structured, and is poorly referenced. In fact many elinks seem to be added as a form of advertising of some local tour businesses. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:06, 11 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]