Wikipedia:Peer review/Ramón Iribarren/archive1

I've listed this article for peer review because I'm new to Wikipedia and would like some guidance on the usefulness of the article, along with a check on some of the translations if possible.

Thanks, D McParland (talk) 14:30, 6 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

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I can't check translations, but here are some comments after a quick skim:

  • Suggest merging the death and legacy sections, as the former is quite short.
  • I suggest looking for additional sources at WP:LIBRARY, Google Scholar, WP:RS/P and your local library system.
  • The lede could possibly be expanded, especially if more sources are added.

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 02:34, 9 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for that, much appreciated. D McParland (talk) 16:14, 11 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]