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I've listed this article for peer review because I am currently working to bring this stub to GA.
Thanks, — VORTEX3427 (Talk!) 06:53, 12 November 2022 (UTC)
Comments from Z1720
editQuick comments after a skim:
- This article isn't a stub anymore, so I have updated its rating.
- The "Personal life" section is a little choppy because it has a lot of short sentences with little connection to eachother. I suggest merging this section to the "Biography" section, expanding it, or editing it to make it flow better.
- Suggest archiving the websites in the "References" section using the IABot by going here: [1]
- Suggest incorporating the sources in the "Further reading" section into the article as sources.
Overall, I do not see any big issues with the article and I think this might be ready for a GAN. Z1720 (talk) 19:11, 13 November 2022 (UTC)