Wikipedia:Peer review/Ronald Reagan/archive3

Ronald Reagan

I would really appreciate it if you guys could please read over this entire article. I'm a little concerned about my efforts to improve the "Presidency" section, but I also just would like to know what you think. I am planning on nominating this article for a featured article after I get some feeback from you guys. Thanks, Happyme22 02:55, 5 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

LuciferMorgan

Review {{citeweb}}. LuciferMorgan 03:20, 5 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Awadewit

I took a quick glance at the article and several things jumped out at me right away.

Why are the bulk of your references from Reagan's autobiography? Autobiographies are notoriously unreliable. Since the page has such a long list of sources, I would have expected those sources to be used. Also, you need to cite more extensively throughout the piece, particularly when you say "some people" or "there is dispute".
Why does the invasion of Grenada receive only two sentences?
Might you integrate the "Criticism" into the appropriate sections of the chronology, such as the Iran-Contra Scandal and the S&L Crisis, rather than relegating it to a list-like section at the end? Awadewit 04:06, 6 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]