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Rothbury

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I've listed this article for peer review because I have added infomation to it over the last few days and want to have advice on wheather the infomation added is okay and worded okay and if the layout is good.

Thanks, NDNSWMI (talk) 16:58, 15 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, NDNSWMI. I have done some edits to the article, mainly copy-editing for grammar and encyclopedic style while also shortening in places. Some content was repeated (now removed or merged), and I've lumped some items together (Crime, for example - and I am not sure the burglary should be included), and done some reformatting in places. As a result, there is now a big gap in the town's recent history, which could be filled by perhaps describing its 20th century growth (in my view, history isn't just about significant single events). It's perhaps worth looking at other articles about English towns to see what they cover - I have previously edited the Seaham article, for example. Hope this helps. Paul W (talk) 15:51, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for this, that's really helpful NDNSWMI (talk) 17:03, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]