Wikipedia:Peer review/RuneScape/archive4

RuneScape

We want to know how RuneScape can be edited in order to attain FA status. It has already passed a GA nom.--Ed ^{¿Cómo estás?} 21:34, 29 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The lead section could do with some polishing. The second paragraph, about Gielinor, looks fancrufty. Consider jettisoning the paragraph, moving useful information to the third paragraph (which then becomes the second paragraph). It wouldn't hurt to add another paragraph which summarises the history of the game, reviews it has received and/or its impact on the world/Internet/MMORPG industry. --J.L.W.S. The Special One 08:32, 30 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

We already have those things you mentioned in your last suggestion. There's a paragraph on it's history and development and one on its reception. The reception paragraph covers the impact on the world, internet, and MMORPG industry, although more info could be added on that. I'll see what I can find. Also, I'll make the changes to the lead section right now.--Ed ^{¿Cómo estás?} 13:44, 30 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

When I wrote paragraphs, I meant paragraphs in the lead section. Sorry for not explaining clearly. --J.L.W.S. The Special One 14:20, 30 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Oh, that's fine. I'll get to it ASAP.--Ed ^{¿Cómo estás?} 14:33, 30 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I got the lead paragraph that you wanted done. Any more suggestions?--Ed ^{¿Cómo estás?} 16:43, 8 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]