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Same-sex marriage in Canada

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This article is good, but needs some work so it can eventually be re-nominated for feature article status. Ardenn 07:00, 12 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

  • I suggest the following:
  • WP:LEAD- please shortern the lead, to a maximum of 3 paragraphs, so that it is brief and terse
  • WP:V and WP:FOOTNOTE- instead of imbedded external links, convert them to inline citations. There are also many numbers that should be cited.
  • WP:CITE- (in addition to the footnotes) have citation information for the sources used (consider {{Cite web}}
  • WP:MOS- remove the "the"s in front of the headings
  • WP:WIAFA- simplify the long ToC, and "that the prose is compelling, even brilliant"
  • Thanks, AndyZ t 19:38, 15 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]
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