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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I've made some major improvements and would like to get this up to GA status someday.
Thanks, Paper Luigi T • C 06:43, 28 January 2013 (UTC)
- "The characters of Jack and Aku are voiced by Phil LaMarr and the late Mako Iwamatsu respectively." Shouldn't this say "were voiced" instead of "are voiced"?
- I don't think it is necessary to include the quote at the beginning of the Plot section.
- In the second paragraph of Plot, it seems a bit unbalanced to discuss one episode in such detail without mentioning any others. I suggest trimming out unnecessary details, or incorporating other episodes.
- "beyond what is available in our current time" Avoid using first-person pronouns.
- "Aku himself is obviously supernatural" Why would this be obvious? See MOS:OPED
- "Regardless of the setting, the simple, minimalistic art style employed resembles ukiyo-e paintings." This claim belongs in a Style or Influences section, not the Setting section.
- "The only time Young Jack has spoken is in Episode XXXI." Useless trivia.
- Why is the Characters section entirely unsourced?
- The Style and cultural references needs more references as well.
If you find this sort of feedback helpful, leave a note here and I'll continue. --Cryptic C62 · Talk 00:53, 4 February 2013 (UTC)