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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to take the article to FLC
Thanks, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 19:50, 21 January 2012 (UTC)
Comments
- No image for the infobox?
- "Selena had released 22 music videos and 12 video/live albums during her career" no need for "had".
- No need to link orchestra.
- "which is a duet with" just "a duet with" is fine (you don't need "which is a").
- "it featured Selena and a couple of people dancing" -> "featuring Selena and two people dancing..."
- " dancing the cumbia dance in a beach house" -> "dancing to the cumbia in a beach house" and delink "beach house".
- "dancing in the styles of hip hop." -> "hip-hop dancing."
- Link Joshua Tree National Park and make the capitalisation correct.
- You could mention in one sentence how/why Selena died.
- ""Viviras Selena", which is a tribute song," don't need "which is".
- "was only featured in two scenes" -> "was featured in only two scenes"
- "During Selena's tenth death anniversary " -> "In 2005, ten years after Selena's death..."
- Make the tables conform with MOS:DTT, i.e. focus on the accessibility. You aren't prohibited from using colours for pure visual appeal, but please use col and row scopes.
- Song titles don't match reliable sources with their capitalisation.
- Don't think you need a separate table for posthumous videos, merge the tables into one sortable table.
- "Video/Live albums" as a title isn't good, at least decapitalise and make it "Video/live albums"...
- No need for the bullet points in the certifications column.
- Ensure all references comply with WP:DASH (i.e. en-dashes not spaced hyphens) and have publisher/publication dates wherever possible.