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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to see how it could improve, being one of my first articles.
Thanks, Skullovitch (talk) 14:39, 19 June 2022 (UTC)
@Skullovitch: I have checked the whole article. Would you check Basshunter article in return? List of issues:
- 1. "During World War II Sholom was deported to a Nazi internment camp in Bralow, Ukraine." - I think something is wrong with name "Bralow" - can't find anything about this place/city. Eurohunter (talk) 23:36, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
- 2. Use surname than name or full name in the article. Eurohunter (talk) 23:36, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
- 3. Missing references. Eurohunter (talk) 23:36, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
- 4. "Beth Sholem synagogue" - do you know which synagogue in the United States it is or is it in Canada?
- 5. He mgrated to "America" or exactly to the United States? If there are sources for that. Eurohunter (talk) 23:36, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
- 6. "Sholom sang for the closing scene of The Garden of the Finzi-Continis and also sang for the film, The Eichmann Story." - add years of release for films. Eurohunter (talk) 23:36, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
- 7. "He made more than 160 recordings of his own music." - he did not release any single or album? There is a lot of works. Would be good to find reliable source about these works and list them and discography section and describe in Career section. Eurohunter (talk) 23:36, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
- 8. Links to redirects. See Help:Link color. Eurohunter (talk) 23:10, 25 June 2022 (UTC)