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SoloTürk

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I plan to nominate this for a GA, which will be my first ever here, so I'd like some general feedback. I myself am not quite sure about the current structure of the article, for example the first paragraph in the history section the first paragraph of the selection and training section are almost identical, with the latter only being a bit more detailed, and to be honest I don't which step to take to fix it. Any comments are appreciated, thanks! ~Styyx^{Talk? ^-^} 17:34, 16 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from CactiStaccingCrane (talk)

I suggest merging 1 or 2-sentences paragraphs into each other, to achieve cohesion.

A few paragraphs in the "History" section merged.

Reference 3 seems unreliable

Removed the Townhall.com source, as the sentence is already sourced by 2 other references.

"Flight with a Single F-16 Aircraft" program should be Flight with a Single F-16 Aircraft program

Removed "" and instead made italic.

"SoloTürk tonosu" (lit. SoloTürk roll) should be SoloTürk roll

Removed Turkish word together with "" and instead made italic.

3,5 tonnes should be 3.5 tonnes with a non-breaking space in between, see WP:NBSP

Replaced by 3.5{{nbsp}}tonnes

Top part of SoloTürk. caption should remove the period ( . ), recommend to change the caption all together. The period is only used when there are 2+ sentences

Removed period in this and other pictured. Caption changed.

... make their decisions." should be ... make their decisions". since the period is not part of the dialogue

Moved the period.

Many references should change the website name from URL name to the website name itself. Example: www.trthaber.com should be TRT Haber

Done.

@Styyx: Here's my comments. Cheers, and good luck at good article nominations. CactiStaccingCrane (talk) 08:10, 22 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

CactiStaccingCrane Huge thanks for the comments, I've done my best to address them. :) If you find anything else feel free to add more comments! ~Styyx^{Talk? ^-^} 08:08, 23 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]