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Stanley Tucci

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I've listed this article for peer review because I expanded the career section of this page. I also added TV roles in the intro. Before my edits, the career section was quite short. I would also like to know whether the article would qualify as GA.

Thanks, Virin1009 (talk) 11:49, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from L150

Good work on expanding this article. It still needs a bit more work to reach GA level. Some feedback below. L150 19:38, 30 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Ensure lead section summarises article
Avoid mentioning too many film titles - just list his more famous roles

1995–2004: Breakthrough

First paragraph has no references
Second paragraph also has no references
Ensure references match what is being said, eg. "received six Academy Award nominations" - where's the source for that?
Try varying the sentences a little - they all begin with "In 1998, In XXXX)
Spelling error with "Tucci anoth Golden Globe Award"

2005–2011

First sentence missing references. Merge this sentence with another paragraph.
Third paragraph missing references.
As these are some of his major roles, consider expanding the prose and go into more detail about his performances
Film titles need to be italicized. (eg. Captain America: The First Avenger)

2012–2016

Third and fourth paragraphs missing references
Try varying the sentences a little - they all begin with "In 1998, In XXXX)
All images could do with alt-text

2017–present

First and second paragraphs missing references
Try varying the sentences a little - they all begin with "In 1998, In XXXX)
Merge some paragraphs together and keep them consistent